Dark Knight

Dark Knight

A Poem by GDmonster

Oh dark knight
How you shine in the moon light
In the waters you gleam
Your refection glows
But still your very soul dwells in the dark
As you stand next to the oak
In your black cloak
You look up at the night sky
At the bright stars that are up there


© 2012 GDmonster


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 GDmonster
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the title is very much different from the verses.you are describing a night(which you have done very elegantly though)but the title is referring the"KNIGHT".i didn't get the connection between them.but the poem is sorely very nice and the description is very much appreciable.nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

my bad i forgot to put the k in knight
The dark story

7 Years Ago

oh.it's okay....:)



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Why so serious?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

Oh... well next my review.

And here... we... Go!

It was good
 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

but thanks i guss
Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

lol :) I love The Dark Knight

but really a good poem
I like how it starts with the beauty of the black knight. Good imagery throughout.

Posted 7 Years Ago


idk if it has a connection to batman or not (does it? O.o) but its a good poem:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Its not that kind of dark knight, think dragons and stuff like that.
Timeless-Chan

7 Years Ago

Ohhhhh alright that makes it seem more interesting^_^ great write!
I like it good job! but my portayal of a dark knight is a little different.... unique

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
the title is very much different from the verses.you are describing a night(which you have done very elegantly though)but the title is referring the"KNIGHT".i didn't get the connection between them.but the poem is sorely very nice and the description is very much appreciable.nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
 GDmonster

7 Years Ago

my bad i forgot to put the k in knight
The dark story

7 Years Ago

oh.it's okay....:)
Awesome. I like the picture it painted in my head

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i could totally picture this perfectly, all ominous, :)) nice job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wish there was more for poems like these could get deeper. I like it though

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 19, 2012
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