Fault in my Judgement

Fault in my Judgement

A Poem by Gbannersauce

This poem takes place when I was 4 years old and didn't know any better. I hope you enjoy!



Fault in my Judgement


By Danielle Baker




I felt the cool air slide passed,


As I rocked in my seat,


Going foward and backward had been fun,


And I didn't see the danger in swaying very fast, 



The air was brisk and playful,


Very much like me,


But suddenly that all began to sway,


And I felt the cheer begin to dull,



I blinked and heard a shout,


I was on the floor, calling out a roar,


The vision became twisted and fuzzy,


My eyes swayed, and became filled with boiling doubt,



Like a feather through the air,


I was flying out of the room,


My head was numb,


Numb from all the pain, that was too much for me to bare,



My head soon began to click in,


I was in the ER,


On a solid white bed,


Filled with blood spilling from my knee and chin,



Then next, all I saw BLACK,


A putrid faze of sleep,


I only awoke to a soft sound,


That seemed to wake me on a clack!



This was a decade ago,


And now all was said and done,


But I'll still remeber the fault,


That had almost put me on a deathly crow,



© 2012 Gbannersauce

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Back in the days when we were younger.....
Vivid and good

Posted 12 Years Ago

Innocence personified! I don't think I have to say anything else. Great expression.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on May 24, 2012
Last Updated on May 24, 2012
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