I'm ok

I'm ok

A Poem by Green
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7 months on...

"
I'm ok
And you knew I would be
You never asked me, 
like you did Mom
You just knew
I miss that about you
That unwavering confidence
That foolhardy belief
that I could do anything
You believed in me
You believed so strongly
that I had no choice
but to believe in myself

© 2018 Green


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This is beautiful. i loved it

Posted 4 Years Ago


a father leaving a daughter with so much confidence...even as he is gone, that belief still lives with her.
a stirring tribute to a mentor....
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Not all of us were lucky enough to "survive" life's happens unmarked. And an unrelenting faith in someone else's abilities doesn't always follow through. Experience is a true b***h to have to acquire and overcome.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sometimes it takes someone else to believe in you in order for you to believe in yourself. This poem did a nice job of getting that relatable message across. I liked how the beginning lines tricked me into thinking this was a person who didn't care or didn't know you might've not been ok, to being a pillar of support to find self confidence.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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I'm living in the good ol' south of the US of A. Professionally, I'm an engineer and I guess that means I'm supposed to know things. I don't always. I write because I can, and because I can write word.. more..

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