A Part Of My Soul

A Part Of My Soul

A Poem by Giulia King

 I crave love.
  The deepest, purest, rawest form of love. 
  The kind of love where it hurts.
I crave you. 

My ray of light
You are the sunlight through the windows of my room.
  You are someone I can write about endlessly, 
  never getting tired of writing about how you are my sole galaxy in this dark universe.

  My beloved one, 
  I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips 
can put poetry to shame.

I'm always soft for you, 
you brought my stone cold heart to life.
I want to kiss you lazily like we have all the time in the world 
and also urgently, like there’s no tomorrow.
I may not be able to hold you in my arms forever, 
but trust me when I say;
you’ll forever be in my words,
 in my poetry, 
in my heart,
and always, a part of my soul.


© 2018 Giulia King


Author's Note

Giulia King
Thank you for loving me the way you do. x

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I crave the love that doesn't hurt - the love that's always there - the love that will envelop us without expecting a single thing in return - the love that comes when you finally put aside your craving / wanting / need ... now that's an endless love

I like the sentiment of your poem ... best wishes for the muse X

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Giulia King

2 Years Ago

I like your little poem. Thank you for reading :)
KWP

2 Years Ago

Haha that was a comment not a poem 😃
Giulia King

2 Years Ago

Hahaha sorry but I really liked it! 😂



Reviews

This is such a wonderful, truthful, heartfelt declaration of love: 'want to kiss you like we have all the time in the world, and also urgently like there's no tomorrow'.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Oh yes, all who came and went left a part of them behind which we will unknowingly carry until the very end. Bittersweet piece. I bet that came right from the heart :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

It did.. Thank you for reading :)
Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed.

A good write, Giullia.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giulia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Ted :)
"I crave love.
The deepest, purest, rawest form of love.
The kind of love where it hurts.
I crave you.

My ray of light."

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome...
" I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame." beautiful poem delicately woven on love. Well written, all lines are delight for reader..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :))
What a wonderful poem! It's a declaration of love, laced with gratitude, expressed with truth and creativity. The voice is consistent and honest.
'My beloved one, I want to write about how every word that falls off your lips
can put poetry to shame.'

Whoever is the recipient of such declaration of love is indeed a lucky man.

WELL DONE

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

Thank you for this amazing review! It put a big smile on my face :) xx
BlackPrince

2 Years Ago

Miss King,I'm glad BlackPrince put a smile on your face. Clearly we're both royalty, and I really ad.. read more
Giullia,
A deep tone to reach the depths of emotion for a lover. Your poem portrays a commitment that is spiritual and cannot be broken. We all yearn for this strength in a love relationship and if you are fortunate to have been there, you always carry a piece of it in your heart.
Blessings,
Richie b.





Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

You're absolutely right, Richie. Blessings to you as well, my friend.
Wow, it's so romantic. Falling in love with someone is the best part in our life. Very well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

It really is :) Thank you :)
Beautiful. I enjoyed the peaceful inward drawing. Thank you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

And thank you! :)
that was extremely romantic ;) I could see everything in my head :) amazing job :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Giulia King

2 Years Ago

I'm happy you could visualize it :) Thank you so much for reading!

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