Cascading Fire

Cascading Fire

A Poem by Holly Mason

crescent wings of starlit desire
harboring soul of cascading fire
grace with presence of empathy
sounding loud in a forever sea
kiss the sender of patience time
holding close in a loving entwine
certain air will grasp the soul
letting go of which it knows
cascading fire of crystals desire
keep coveted small hearts, liar
strong winds soul, smacking distaste
knowing nothing, stampeding in haste
sea hears only an entrance of care
blissfully knowing in what it is aware
wings like tendrils, rush forward in wind
releasing, rehashing the fires within

© 2013 Holly Mason


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This is written in such a professional way that carry the reader along.
I love the poetic devices you used and your choice words.

It's really amazing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Holly Mason

3 Months Ago

Thank you , hope life is treating you well. Nice meeting you , Holly
Lyrical write , beautiful words.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

you got me at ...beautiful words*)
thank you for reading
Great speed. Flows beautifully

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

Thank Ya super much
nice meeting you , Holly
I am amazed by the beauty of the rhymed piece.
Each word plays,tumbles and frolicks in magical way!
I adore this wonderful work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

thank you unsung hero*)*) much
zainul

6 Years Ago

You are always welcome,dear poet.:)
The tones simply entwine and carry me away... I'm wanting to see phoenix arising...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

she will...with the empathy of a soul filled with grace, fighting *)
thank you fine friend, al.. read more
Chris

6 Years Ago

You soooooooooooooo have my thoughts... The sun just broke through the cloud cover here - quite for .. read more
It reads like a magical spell being cast. Very lyrical and it has a certain rhythm to it. Enjoyed reading.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the concept of "Cascading" Fire. I like the rhymes. It is important to get them right, especially in couplets and you do. Some lovely phrases here too: "starlit desire", "forever sea" and "wings like tendrils" to name a few. I think you have a very strong closing couplet too,
"wings like tendrils, rush forward in wind
releasing, rehashing the fires within"
The beginning was about containing fire within and the end speaks of releasing it so there's a coherent progression of thought within the poem.
Well done! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you very much ...truly
I really like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you much for enjoying*) truly
thats very beautiful holly

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

thank you fine sir
Another wonderful side of your writing Holly. The woman of many talents :-)
Great to see all the different styles you wordplay with.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

well I thank you fine sir....oh sorry I meant B.F.F.*)
Distant horizons

7 Years Ago

:-)

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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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