I'll let you go

I'll let you go

A Poem by Hidden Happiness
"

my feelings on a paper

"
I pack your suitcase 
And i pack my heart with it
It's just 15 days you say
But to me, it's like 15 years
I don't know how to control my tears
But I let you go.

'No' a part of me screams
'This is good and you must go'
'But what if its not safe?'
The other part quietly inquires
When you're there, how will i get you what you require?
But still I gotta let you go.

I know I'll miss you with all my heart
But this is good and you should go
The tensions, the worries I'll try to discard
And hope for the best and pray to God
That you stay happy and you stay safe
Promise me you'll miss me and call me everyday
I don't know what awaits
But yes, I'll let you go.

© 2012 Hidden Happiness


Author's Note

Hidden Happiness
one of my really really close friend got an opportunity to go for a fellowship for 15 days but i never stayed away from her even for one day so yeah it was tough and the only way to let my feelings out was through a poem...so yeah what do you think? please comment and thanks:):).

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i really like the poem because i can feel your emotion... letting go of someone you really love..
great poem :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

Thank u :-).
Hotaru

8 Years Ago

you're welcome :DD
Great poem. I thought of my children and how one day they will have to leave home.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

aww thank you so much:).
It sounds like its tough to let that person go, but you're going to be strong and do it anyways. I can respect that a great deal, and I really like the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very deep and emotional.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful, there's so much emotion. It was as if i felt it, this is a great write, Good Job! I love this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was an emotional write. It is hard to be away from someone that you care about. Nice job. It was great. I could feel everything you did. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this! I think it can be made into a song as well, it's a beautiful piece.

~*Anastasia Shalroy~*

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem really made me sad because I'm currently in a long distance relationship (we are only seperated by a few hours but ya, :( ) It sucks lol (not your poem, the long distance thing) We see each other about every 2-3 weeks adn only for a few days, if that...so this poem kind of hit home for me. Usually I love poetry stuffed with singular images, but this diction and almost letter-like essence works

Posted 9 Years Ago



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