Blown away

Blown Away

She was living with abuse
Bruises on her body,
There are marks on her wrist
Her father threatened her

She felt confused in her life
She feel miserable every day
She was raped at 16
In her dark bedroom

She lost her mother at 19
Her father beat her up
Trapped isolated in basement
Rats cripple on the floor

She eats rotten can foods
Rusted bedroom with no mattress,
She shed a tears and sorrowness

She dream of an escape,
One day things have changed
Praying will make it better
That god will save her tonight

She heard loud thunder
Like a voice of god's in sky
The sky turns dark grey,
Lightning sound burst out

She stayed downstairs all day
Hearing the winds scream,
Outside her window
She felt frightened all alone,

Father was drunk and sober
He cannot awoke from sleep
Lying on the couch alone,
Never know what happened

She called it sweet vengence
When life filled with pain
Washing all the sins away
In her own little home

A tornado strucks her home
She have closed her ears
Every bricks and woods
Have blown away into misted air,

She cannot stand the sound
It was a cold lonely night,
She prayed to be saved
Everything has blown away

You see devil eyes in the sky
As she sits there shivered,
Watched her house destroyed
Every little thing blown away

Her father was dead ,
Even her own pain concealed
But she forgived him
Now she is set free.

Reviews

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Great you wrote this. Up there there is so many wounded souls. They search for help and you know they are very shy and pasive. We need talk more and we do it more. Words have nice sounds together. So 100 percent my dear friend.

[Lost & Lonely]

Wow, very song message. I love it. You really captured the feeling of being stuck in those situations and getting out.

[Celie Rose]

This is so emotional. I can really relate to your poem. Emotional and physical abuse must stop. I feel very strongly about this. Written very well. Keep writing

[Hiroshi Masters]

Yes, I'm not a depressing person. But I had a family who go thru this and i am trying to get message across.