A Poem by HorrorMaster

A poem about my grandma that pass away few years ago. I miss her ;(


I see her laying on her bed,
I stared at her eyes all red.
I feel her heart stop beating,

Then tears pour from my eye,

as my mom opens the door, seeing me cry.
She saw her laying on her bed dying.
I told my mom, “It seems like she is dead.”
Death appearing in her house.
It came to take her away.
Her life will never be the same,
as she checks into heaven on this day.

© 2010 HorrorMaster

Author's Note

I wish she was here still alive right now. :(

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I do not know how I will feel when my grandmother passes away. I think I will cherish her memories but always curse life. Great emotional poem. Thoughtful and makes us realize what we have in this world is each other.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Death is never something that passes easy, I lost my grandmother too so know what you mean. But I will allways hold the memories of her close, she was a great person, and the best grandmother I could have ever asked for. Good job I'm sure she would be proud:D

Posted 9 Years Ago

I miss my Grandma too. A lovely poem and tribute to her and how you felt about her and the loss. Very haunting music to accompany your writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very emotional. Lovely piece


Posted 9 Years Ago

She must have been real close to you!


Posted 9 Years Ago

heaps of emotion and lot of pain in this made me tearful to.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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This was lovely, a lot of emotion in this. Well done!


Posted 9 Years Ago

This made me tear up. I'm really close to my grandma--she raised me, took care of me even more than my mother did! I don't know what I'd do without her. This teaches you not to take anyone for granted!

Posted 9 Years Ago

It catches up with us all. 40,000 a day in the USA? Ach, but where wld death be without life?

Posted 9 Years Ago

good write, "seem / should be seams" (i think) i really liked the flow of this. well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on April 13, 2010
Last Updated on September 18, 2010
Tags: death, depression
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