Blood on the Page

Inspired by a comment by Infinity's Shadow...

 

I open my eyes

See you there

I try to scream

There's too much fear

Your words are soft

My body's in heat

I'll give into defeat

Offer my neck

Your breath

Your touch

My Death

Too much

scream in pain

Hindered by a moan...

You lick your lips

Life begins to slip

Lingering essence

Eyes open wide

I drink from your wrist

Body lusts

I cannot control

enthralling thrusts

Endless supply

I simply comply

Hands explore

Body explodes...

Satisfied sighs

Escape blood leaking lips

Drip drip drip

Reviews

[Moonblade]

I should stop reading your poems, because I think I'm getting addicted. My love for vampires is hindering my judgment of time and I might get a little too caught up reading your work and not spend enough time doing other things I should be doing. Keep it up.

By the way, I'll probably be reading and possibly reviewing all of the poems in this book.

[lexingtonvlair]

this is a fun read i really enjoyed the part
Your breath Your touch My Death Too much
kind've made me heart beat faster at that point
thanks

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooh....wow, I absolutely love this piece!!! I'm putting this in my favorites for safe-keeping. ;) Awesome write!!!

Heather

[Flow]

I enjoying watching you perfect your bitting poetry, each one gets better as far as flow and form, well done!

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

It's very fast beat and heat pounding. I don't think I could have read this slowly. I liked how it was just so up front with everything and showed the passion, lust, and pain.

[Wolfwind Words]

A beautiful masterpiece of thrilling blood lust. I could feel the dark passions that flowed into these words and then onto the page for us to imbibe in.
First fear, then lust came bursting out perfectly penned.

Great Job!
Infinity's Shadow

[John Stussy]

Personally, I prefer werewolves.. But, I do have a soft spot for the occasional, well-written vampire poem. This one fit right into that, and it wasn't too cliche like so many on here are. Kudos to you on focusing on a facet other than being the prince/princess of darkness and such.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully penned, a lovely style. Thank you for sharing. Debileah