Time

Time

A Poem by Inder24
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in today world, people should be taught the value of time and how every second matters in our life. This is just one way to make one's conscious about time. :)

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We have got so much time ,
we got so much life ,
thinking we will do it another day,
or do it next time.
whenever someone calls out
we say five minutes every time
but we never realize that
any moment can change our life .
our approach is obsolete
The time is so lean
understanding every moment
that's what it needs.
it teaches us discipline
the act to do everything neat
time will only respect us 
when we will utilize it needfully
don't waste the precious moments
cause they never come back
cause every second, every moment
time is ticking away from our life

© 2013 Inder24


Author's Note

Inder24
ignore grammer problems

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so so true! The older I get, the more real this sentiment becomes. Nice job. I didn't notice any major grammar errors, maybe a few places a colloquialism misused, but nothing major.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inder24

8 Years Ago

Thanks Mark for the review.. means a lot!!
Great subject matter and I really enjoyed reading it ... great job !!! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Inder24

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
I like the theme of this poem. I am a time-lover, so I value time like gold. I never waste any moment for it will never come back once I let it pass. I have a poem entitled "Love Me" which has the same theme as this.

Nice job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Inder24

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. i'll surely read your poem too :)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Inder. It's already compiled in my Hear My Mind Volume 2. You can check it on http://www.w.. read more
You're very right. Time sometimes leaves us wondering, "Where did the time go?" Besides the grammar :) it was an excellent write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Inder24

8 Years Ago

Ya, even i wonder how did i utilize my time! thank you ! :)

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