Time

in today world, people should be taught the value of time and how every second matters in our life. This is just one way to make one's conscious about time. :)

We have got so much time ,

we got so much life ,

thinking we will do it another day,

or do it next time.

whenever someone calls out

we say five minutes every time

but we never realize that

any moment can change our life .

our approach is obsolete

The time is so lean

understanding every moment

that's what it needs.

it teaches us discipline

the act to do everything neat

time will only respect us 

when we will utilize it needfully

don't waste the precious moments

cause they never come back

cause every second, every moment

time is ticking away from our life

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems

Reviews

[Mark]

so so true! The older I get, the more real this sentiment becomes. Nice job. I didn't notice any major grammar errors, maybe a few places a colloquialism misused, but nothing major.

[Inder24]

Thanks Mark for the review.. means a lot!!

[Debbie_Philly]

Great subject matter and I really enjoyed reading it ... great job !!! :)

[Inder24]

Thanks :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I like the theme of this poem. I am a time-lover, so I value time like gold. I never waste any moment for it will never come back once I let it pass. I have a poem entitled "Love Me" which has the same theme as this.

Nice job. :)

[Inder24]

Thanks for the review. i'll surely read your poem too :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Inder. It's already compiled in my Hear My Mind Volume 2. You can check it on http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/daisievergara/1154971/

[Lil Guppy]

You're very right. Time sometimes leaves us wondering, "Where did the time go?" Besides the grammar :) it was an excellent write!

[Inder24]

Ya, even i wonder how did i utilize my time! thank you ! :)