morning and evening

morning and evening

A Poem by Inder24
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Everyday we see what nature has given to us in one way or another . I am just trying to describe it through a child's eyes!!

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In the morning or in the evening
When I look out of the window
I can see the whole world
Even through a little hole

In the morning the sun rises
In the evening it sets
But the reason is to tell
Why the stars twinkle at the end

In the morning we wake up
In the evening we play
We try to picture the clouds
In some or the other way

The air is so good
The weather is so nice
Now I know why
It is called mother earth everytime !

© 2013 Inder24


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Inder24
I tried my best.. now its upto your reviews!

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dear one .... Life is a gift everlasting.
When I read your poem, I see a
flower u unfolding in a symphony of
beauty. truly.... Pat

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inder24

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :) . It means a lot :)
There are reasons to tell through a child's eyes. A splendid poem. ............

Posted 7 Years Ago


Inder24

7 Years Ago

yep :D thanks for the review :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
Nature it is... (y) carry on :) like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inder24

7 Years Ago

thank you :)
sweet poem through a kids eye read by a kid's heart :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Inder24

8 Years Ago

The child inside me is saying "thank you" !! :D
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

:)

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Tags: morning, sun, moon, nature, evening, enviornment

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Inder24
Inder24

Ahmedabad, India



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