BLUE

Something written laying on my back ....just taking in Gods handiwork

 

 

 

Amazng …Space

Amazing…. Sky

Amazing….Day

 

My time…

My moment…

As I just lay back …..and carpe’

 

I…. I-n-h-a-l-e  it

Till I taste it

Climb outside my self

Embrace it

 

Sunshine…….. like forever ….

And… forever……..Ever

Warms my face…

My belly

Like the perfect lover

 

Thinkin’ bout a bit of nothin’

A lil’ somethin’ BLUE

Borrowed from the very hands of God

 

BLUE….undefineable …blue

As far as I can …ever…imagine seeing

Or……..want to

A thousand hues…..dancin’ real close

 

“ Makes me wanna reach out ….and touch tomorrow”  ….kinda blue

delicate like powdered whispers

suspended softly from yesterday

 

It almost …..cools me

Just watchin’

 Perfect….

BLUE

Un….definable

Blow-my-mindable

BLUE

 

 

© 2004,©2007 J. Hampton [email protected]

 

 

 

Reviews

[Anthony D. Howe]

Beautiful. Your really have a way of just reveling in the moment. You might want to add a bracket at the begining of your first tag for center, just look at the begning of the poem and you will see wat I mean. Once again, I must tell you, I love how you are able to suck people in. i really felt like I was laying on top of a sunny hill with a cool breeze blowing across my face, staring at the sky, just drinking it all in.

[Helen Woodward]

Good, different is always good! And this is different in it's spacing. Terrific to see you spreading those talented wings of yours...Love "Blow my mindable!" (is that a word?) It is now!!!
You're right Blue can be warming, cooling and embraceable, I never thought about it, good girl!
Something new...Blue.
Congrats on an experiment that didn't go wrong.
Cheers,
Helen.

[Linda Crawford Ortiz]

Love it! Love the colored font, the images, especially loved the made-up words (mindable) and the way you spread out i-n-h-a-l-e...fantastic! I see it, I breathe it...and I appreciate your place in your day. You may want to consider entering this to the versenators' challenge #20. It really is appropriate. Thanks for the picture.