Let Me Love You

Let Me Love You

A Poem by J. F. Charleston

Hey, Honey I see you there
Drowning in the blues
Come here, into my arms
So they can chase them away
And leave you in my charms

Hey there, Babe
I hear you crying
Come here, and let me, wipe them away
From your pretty green eyes
That shouldn't have to pay

Girl let me stand here
And hold you near
I want to fill you
With fluttering butterflies

Let me catch you
Watching this large
Fiery Sun fade away
Underneath the open horizon

Honey, I love you with all my heart
Let me show you by doing my part
I'll kiss you, hug you
Shop with you, and go on
How you looked in that dress

Let me love you like you want
It may come a little rough
But I know that it's what you want

Girl let me stand here
And hold you near
I want to fill you
With fluttering butterflies

Hey, Darling
I love you today, tonight,
All the freakin' time

Girl let me stand here
And hold you near
I want to fill you
With fluttering butterflies

Let me catch you
Watching this large
Fiery Sun fade away
Underneath the open horizon


© 2013 J. F. Charleston


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J. F. Charleston
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"Honey, I love you with all my heart
Let me show you by doing my part
I'll kiss you, hug you
Shop with you, and go on
How you looked in that dress

Let me love you like you want"
Wow. A fiery poem full of passion and love for your beloved... You are serenading the her by the pastures of love...Excellent...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. F. Charleston

10 Years Ago

Thanks, deep passion comes up. And I agree
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)



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This should be made into a song! Well done. I like the line "I want to fill you with fluttering butterflies." 100/100.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful and hopeful poem. Nice flow of thoughts in the amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is sweet and heart warming~
100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. F. Charleston

10 Years Ago

I agree it is. When I was writing it I felt my own heart become warm. Thanks.
Rhianne Ney

10 Years Ago

You're welcome~
"Honey, I love you with all my heart
Let me show you by doing my part
I'll kiss you, hug you
Shop with you, and go on
How you looked in that dress

Let me love you like you want"
Wow. A fiery poem full of passion and love for your beloved... You are serenading the her by the pastures of love...Excellent...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. F. Charleston

10 Years Ago

Thanks, deep passion comes up. And I agree
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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