Apple red Scars

A Poem by Joshua Gerlach

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The deep wounds may never heal,
even not with proper mending and treatment.

The scars will form red, and shine as blood.

If thou shall crack the dread whip once more, my heart may break,
and cease to form again the scars that held it together;
Bright red, like an apple, like blood.

© 2008 Joshua Gerlach

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Christel Grady

Absolutely perfect grammar! Applause!!!

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Siobhan MacIntyre

Excellently rendered with a magnificent, old-fashioned sentence structure.

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Added on October 31, 2008

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Joshua Gerlach

Spokane, WA

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I'm 17, I've trimmed down the number of writing projects I'm working on, and write in moderation and weekly-to-monthly intervals. I play video games while I think of what I'm going to write, sometime.. more..