Loss

I have been losing stuff this week. :P so lame!

Loss

 

As I lay on the ground sobbing

Quietly looking around for something I lost

My body is violently throbbing

In pain, I am, seeking that which I have lost

I can't feel it anymore

No where to be found,

Can you help me find what I have misplaced?

Searching endlessly in the night

Searching diligently throughout space and time

I lost my world, I lost my place

Searching for my heart, my soul,

That bright light, I misplaced

What a loss

But wait, maybe it's further inside me

-Oh wait, I see it- ,

-I've found it -

 

 

Author's Note

excuse spelling, i suck so bad at it.

Reviews

[Michael X]

not bad at all- i found this writing to be delving in insight- the imagery takes the reader to another place
where pondering the stars is a way of discovering awareness-expressed as only a true poet could
"loss there are many aspects to this writing i find to draw thoughts to contemplation-what Impresses
me most is the emotions- your words can be felt- there is a dire sense of knowing anlong side of
taking the moment day by day, as your words bring images of space and time into heart- great scope
impressive in depthful analysis- your words speak valumes in way of conceptualizing the soul

[Lyra H]

Well done!