The Girl who sat in front of me.

Your personality did a total 180 you stupid b***h.

I’ve never really been one to snitch,

But you’ve left me broke, left me alone.

And gone a turned into a stupid clone

Your body is a temple not a free for all

Sooner or later you’re gonna fall.

I don’t understand it I want to scream

It’s not really happening it’s all a bad dream!

I hate who you are, who you’ve become.

I hate that dress doesn’t cover your bum

What the hell happened?

When we came to an end…

You used to be different,

We were the best of friends

Now I don’t even know who you are

Reviews

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Very A+B, but still quite an enjoyable piece.

Zacky D.

I can feel the emotion coming from this poem. A lot of anger, the voice feels betrayed...

[afra]

sadly i can relate to this poem ...well done

[Leslie Philibert]

You seem to have fallen out with your former friend....
I like this because you make me believe every line, this is real anger.

[SuicidePact.]

Thank you for reading means alot to me :)

[stars are far]

That was so great.. I lived the rhyme in this..
And yeah same words i can send to someone .. So i can relate wwll to this..
Well done

[SuicidePact.]

Thankyou :)

[stars are far]

you are welcome :)

[minisla]

All part of life. Only make you stronger

[quarintine_deathangel]

Aawh sorry this happened to you! If you ever need someone to talk to we're here for you ;) This is straight to the point with real emotion. You're an amaizing writer! You just can't help stupid sometimes. True friends will find them self and come back to real freinds as soon as their run gets old. Others however will ride the wind to wherever it takes them and listen to society. Goodluck with getting real forever friends who know themselves and the idiocy of plastics and fakes. Thanks for the write. ^.

[SuicidePact.]

Oh thankyou and yeah I find great inspiration in this whole friendship to use in my writing so in a way I guess there is some blessings!

[quarintine_deathangel]

Glad you could find a bright side. ^.^

[Priscilla Sayers]

Ouch! The frustrations that can reach the heart as another changes not with us but in an entirely different direction. It happens, sad but true. Just always remain being you and sometimes the other will come back with positive growth after all. We all mature and change at different paces, so patience is needed especially if the friendship is a treasured one. Nicely expressed.

[SuicidePact.]

Thankyou :)

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wow this is seriously how im feeling right now! AMAZING poem! im a huge fan of your writing! great job!!!

[SuicidePact.]

Thanks! and I am sorry that you are going through soemthing similar!

[That_Guy]

I think we all unfortunately know someone like this

[SuicidePact.]

Or at least the type.