The Girl who sat in front of me.

Your personality did a total 180 you stupid b***h.

I’ve never really been one to snitch,

But you’ve left me broke, left me alone.

And gone a turned into a stupid clone

Your body is a temple not a free for all

Sooner or later you’re gonna fall.

I don’t understand it I want to scream

It’s not really happening it’s all a bad dream!

I hate who you are, who you’ve become.

I hate that dress doesn’t cover your bum

What the hell happened?

When we came to an end…

You used to be different,

We were the best of friends

Now I don’t even know who you are

Reviews

[MOON]

People change all the time , life is like thatsometimes, emotional write.

[quixotic_rose]

Sounds like you knew the person and then they decided to become someone else, they embraced their inner fake. I've had some friends do that before and it sucks, but there's nothing to change them back. It sucks, but you've definitely captured what it's like, good job on writing this :)

[L. Edward Neale]

Better out than in I say. Sounds like you wanna punch someone. Glad you chose to write a poem instead. People change indeed. Sometimes it hurts like hell! Sometimes when the dust settles we realise its for the best.

[Max]

up to the we used to be friends part, that sounds like my math class.

[M.E.Lyle]

Good job, I can really feel the hate. At first I thought you were talking about yourself and a personality change, but alas the last few lines say it all. Growing up is a...well, it just is.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is really deep and I can somewhat relate to it! My best friend changed a lot! One moment she was with me laughing and being her normal self. Apparently, when she started hanging out with another girl she started being a total b***h. I couldn't stand to be around her anymore. I can see your pain and emotions in this poem. It's well-written for sure, and it's good to release all of your anger out!
Great job :)

Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Twistedme]

This is one tough poem, the first line jumped out at me, was straight to the point. Defiantely a lot of feeling put into this. Tough indeed.