A forgotten heart.

A forgotten heart.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

My heart is breaking.
Please tell me why it's aching?
Invisible has been me, 
since I was about three..
Mute is what they call me, 
Insignificant, in the eyes of those who see.
I don't want to be her no longer,
I want to show the world that I am stronger! 
Notice me! Screams my heart!
Notice me! Not through my art.
I want recognition, 
no longer to be hidden.
One step at a time, 
Is hard when you can't see the line.
Where to go from here?
When I can't see the end of this year...

© 2013 SuicidePact.


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i think it's fulfilled with yer love...

Posted 11 Years Ago


You are a soul pure and fullfilled with the love of the Creator, you dont need the world , the world needs your love..................

Posted 11 Years Ago


very nicely penned...heart break is expressed in a very nice way..

Posted 11 Years Ago


I don't know if oyu're religious or not but I will say, a life transforming verse from the Bible for me was Proverbs 1:7 "The Fear of God is the beginning of knowledge, but the fool despises wisdom and instruction"

I interpreted this to mean I had to conquer all my fears in life instead of being the next guy to step up in a situation, I became the first, whether I liked it or not, and I've learned it's better to get rid of having a shell and being shy. More people will know you for who you are, and obviously as it says, just being against the flow rebeller is foolish. A fool in tarot is considered a new, youthful and unexperienced spirit ^.~ so either way it isn't too bad XD anyway, I hope that helps, if you wanna talk inbox me ^^ I've dealt with this and I can give insight and example that is real life and recent.

YOu wrote this pretty clearly and straightforward, nice job and thanx for writing.


Posted 11 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

11 Years Ago

Thank-you. I shall re-read the book of Proverbs perhaps? :)
quarintine_deathangel

11 Years Ago

I don't think you have to reread the whole thing XD just if you want know the verse, see if it helps.. read more
some people have no voice outside the written word. Some people seem shy and withdrawn but hand them a pen or type writer and watch out! Those are the great ones. The ones who save their breath for ink.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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