Boy, we've come far

 

I remember when, you said you couldn’t date me...

Said I was too far away,

Never could come out to play...

You said that you’d miss me, late at night

Said you couldn’t be there when I wasn’t alright...

I told you it wouldn’t matter,

That we could get through it.

I guess deep down you secretly knew it.

Cos soon after that we began dating,

We see each other on the odd occasion,

Text during the day,

Phone during the night,

It could of worked much better if we,

lived so much closer

but secretly I think,

distance makes my love for you stronger...

for we treasure our time together

more than most...

Author's Note

this is about my current relationship...

he didn't want to date at first cos of the distance, and distance is harder when you have to rely on parents to drive ya!!

but hey eventually he saw we could make it work...it's been 5 months and still working :D

Reviews

[Who Cares]

Jenn you never fail to impress me, there is a quote I feel relates to this poem well. "Distance is not for the fearful, it is for the bold. It is for those willing to spend alot of time alone in exchange for a little time with the one they love. It is for those knwoing a good thing when they see it even if they don't see it nearly enough" any way nice write sweetie.

[MOON]

Sometimes all we need is another person listening at the end of a line .

[Cathy Wattam]

This is very nice. One point of note - it would be better to say "It could have worked much better if we" rather than "It could of". I enjoyed reading it though.

[zero binty]

Distance between people in love can either make or break a relationship, especially if ones head isn't so into the actual relationship. Glad you and yours have mad eit thus far. Many happy memories for you to look forward to.

[sharonlee]

.... and who knows what the future will bring... the world is not so big when love is true....

[etxcp]

very good! your a really talented writer! WRITE ON!

[s.r.knight]

This is so cute! I'm glad you could make a long distance relationship work! I sure couldn't!

[quixotic_rose]

that is so adorable! I'm glad your conquering the distance and going for it. also, nice poem, it definitely shows how much you care, i loved it :)

[Blindfolded]

True love can conquer anything. Best of luck to you.

[☯]

Aw, this is a very cute and lovely story, I'm happy you got to work it out, and that everything is going smoothly! Great poem :)