The Forbidden Love

The Forgotten Love Between Angels And Demons.

   "Turn Around And Look At Me As I Whisper It Silently.
   
   Please Remember Me As I Reach For You.

   Don't Be Ashamed Of Me For What I Have Done.

   Please Come Closer And Show Me What I Have Lost.

   Show Me What It Is Like To Be Wanted Again.

   Let Me Touch Your Beautiful White Angel Wings.

   Please Don't Be Afraid To Touch My Pitch Black Wings.

   Let Me Hold You Once Again.

   And Let Me Feel Your Heart Beat Again As I Get Close.

   Let Me Smell You Again.

   Let Me Touch You Again.

   Let Me Hold Your Heart As I Did Before.

   I Will Remember The Days We Hade Together Always.

   I Will Remember You For Who You Are And Not What You Have.

   I Will Remain In This Darkness That I Created.

   While You Remain In The Light That Loves You.

   I Will Be Free One Day And When I Get To See You.

   I Will Tell You Before I Get Lost In Myself Again.

   That I Will Always See You In My Dragon Like Eyes.

   They Are A Gate Way To My Lost Soul As I Touch Yours.

   I Am Not Ashamed To Be With You As You Are My Perfect Angel.

   And I Have Become A Tempting Devil.

   It Hurts So Much That I Get This Last Time With You.

   And The Memories Will Remain Forever Burnt In My Chains.

   And This Is What He Has Told Us Of The Forbidden Love That Cannot Be.

   But I Will Never Let Go Of What I Have Always Loved.

   And That Is You And Me."

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow.. this is amazing.. I love it so much! This is such a wonderful piece. I feel like this has many ways to take and it's quite meaningful. =) Just beautiful. I love these lines:

"Let Me Hold You Once Again.

And Let Me Feel Your Heart Beat Again As I Get Close.

Let Me Smell You Again.

Let Me Touch You Again.

Let Me Hold Your Heart As I Did Before.

I Will Remember The Days We Hade Together Always.

I Will Remember You For Who You Are And Not What You Have.

I Will Remain In This Darkness That I Created.

While You Remain In The Light That Loves You."


Your demon has a romantic heart wanting to love.. =)

[Emerald Seas]

Even though you've written this in the context of good and evil, demons and angels, it is a tale so many of us can relate to in lost love. Sadness surrounds your demon... although a softy... because he/it has a heart full of love.

[Layla J Omorose]

Love it. So this is how a demon feels to love an angel. To want something that he knows he can never truly possess. A creature that is supposed to be pure evil has one speck of hope and love...I wonder how the angel feels about the demon. Great write

[Angelove]

Wow, I have a book named Forbidden Love, how wired, nice "story"

[Beautiful Disaster_33]

a haunting write of love
brings tears, sadness but with a hope of love to be...
Captivating write