Dark Rainbow

Beautiful And Dark.

"Come Through My Broken Window.

 Just To See Inside My Dark Room.

 Lay Your Head Down On My Pillow.

 And Let Your Dreams Resume.

 Journey Into My Forgotten World.

 Just The Land Of The Lost Twirled.

 Hollow In The Marsh Of Woe.

 Beyond And Past The Cosmo.

 I Had Little Time.

 Just Holding On Sometime.

 Hoping For Some Daytime.

 But The Reason I'm Here Is A Crime.

 Ripped And Torn The Rule.

 I Just Dipped With The Souls In The Pool.

 The Dead I Gathered As Fuel.

 Commanding Souls Like A Fool.

 I Reached For A Reason.

 But The Dead Was So Sadden.

 They Used Their Might To Have Me Frozen.

 Broke Free And Placed Them In A Coffin.

 Looking Back At What I Did.

 I Opened The Lid.

 Letting Them Out Of My Toy Box Like A Kid.

 But Now God Forbid.

 Now Wondering.

 I Can Feel Them Coming.

 Like A Tornado Twisting.

 As I Stand There Listening.

 Exiled In The Vortex.

 With The Things I Did Now Reflects.

 Darkness Now Infects.

 The Pain The Chains Inflects.

 I Have Been Crying.

 I Can Feel The Dark Choking.

 Inhaling It Like A Haunting.

 Now I'm Paying.

 In Your Dreams You Can Hear My Piano.

 Within The Fading Light As You Walk Away You Can Still See My Lonely Shadow.

 But Your Picture Will Keep My Love For You In My Dying Heart Of Sorrow. 

 Just Come Back Anytime Through My Window Over My Dark Rainbow."

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Breath-taking piece my dear!!! Such imagery that plays in my mind!! I love it!! You never fail to impress me.. From your beginning.. you know how to catch the reader in.. =) I love how beautifully written this is with so much darkness..
The emotions are amazing in this..
A dark, haunting.. chill... poem... Fantastic piece!! >.< im saving this one too..
A dark poet you are but you sure know how to live with life as it balances you. Even with such struggles, you appear to inspire... >.< i'm just so.. inspired by you! lol. Your work is that AWESOME!

[LittleGuitar94]

Wow, this is brilliant! I love the rhyming scheme, not that many people actually make the effort with their poetry, it's nice to see. Also the capitalisation of every word. All in all an intriguing poem! Great write!

[Cherrie Palmer]

what an amazing openinng.."Come Through My Broken Window.
Just To See Inside My Dark Room. Lay Your Head Down On My Pillow.
And Let Your Dreams Resume....
I loved it