Love Lives

lone tear in my eye
no sigh in my cry til you
 love alive in me

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Very nice words. thanks for sharing.

[Misery]

Expanding your skills, dear Jen?
A soft and sweet moment captured in your chosen words.

[Jen]

O' sweet Misery....did I do it? Do you think my expansion was a sucess? I appreciate your reviews.

[Misery]

Your words retain emotions that the reader can 'feel'.
That is success in my opinion.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome Senryu... loved it.

[Jen]

Thank you for your wonderful review!

[sinNsincerity]

this is so beautiful and leads me to wander in my wonder...

[Jen]

You are so kind Sin, thank you! May the wonder you wander in, take you to magical places!