Emergence

Emergence

A Poem by xDalliance

My mind is so muddled up
It can't think of anything nor sum it up
Its spinning in circles, reaching no destination
My thoughts are lost, having no direction

They're like a whirlwind inside of me
They don't stop, they sunder me
It feels like I'll be down under a mound
Down dark, before I know what's wrong

I stagger, I can't focus
There's something, but it feels like I'm hocus
But I can feel it, if rather not see it
It guides me, our hands fit

Im blinded, I feel light
The soft hands guide me, and I sense their might
The view clears and I'm stunned awake
It's my world, the stars to take.

© 2014 xDalliance


Author's Note

xDalliance
Sometimes is so happens that I cannot read a poem or a story beyond a few lines. It's simply because it does not interest me. If so is the case with my poems, do tell me so :) And of course honest reviews are appreciated!

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AMAZING!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


xDalliance

9 Years Ago

Haha, thank you so much!
such rich stanzas. definitely worth a read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nicely penned and expressive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Were trying to rhyme in the first two stanzas? Otherwise it just seems out of place with the last two. Otherwise your words and all are wonderfully done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Im blinded, I feel light
The soft hands guide me, and I sense their might
The view clears and I'm stunned awake
It's my world, the stars to take.

Well.... This is very nice write and such a beautiful write. You are really talented poet. I am looking more from you dear. Keep it up dear. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thank you Saddam! Hum aapke bhi poems ka intezar karenge! :D
Saddam

10 Years Ago

you are welcome dear.
Im blinded, I feel light
The soft hands guide me, and I sense their might
The view clears and I'm stunned awake
It's my world, the stars to take.

Well.... This is very nice write and such a beautiful write. You are really talented poet. I am looking more from you dear. Keep it up dear. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


OMG, WOW! Such a talented write, loved it.

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Haha thank you so much Kaze! :)
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome my friend. :-)
Hey I like this ... it rather captivates me to tell you the truth... I like the essence and the murky clarity, if that makes sense...you have much depth in your mind, you could perhaps read it over a few times and change minor words here and there, I do like it very much though xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Haha yes that does make sense! Yes I'll try to perfect it by rereading it. Thank you th0 means a lot.. read more
KWP

10 Years Ago

you have many levels - i look forward to reading more xx
xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thank you once again! :) I too look forward to read yours ^.^
Sometimes we are overwhelmed. By the world ,by life sometimes by the thought running through our head. Fine poetry J. Your poems hold my interest just fine :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


xDalliance

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vi! Haha I'm glad I don't have the power to disinterest people! :P :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Ha that is very funny.You are welcome hunny :)

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