A Lonely Heart

A Lonely Heart

A Poem by Jas Alejandrino Ramos

While all the hearts sing,

Sing for love

There’s a heart that cries,
Cries for the sufferings,

Sufferings of a broken heart


That heart feels nothing,

Nothing but loneliness,

Loneliness that nobody wants,

The feeling that everyone fears to feel,

The feeling of a lonely heart.

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Unknown Creativity

Oct 19, 2010


© 2010 Jas Alejandrino Ramos


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wow i feel Bedazzled lol. I really enjoyed the ending i think this style of fliping the switch on what the writers thinking is really good i love to read poems such as these as they provoke such a huge amount of thought in such a small part of time. It actually made me laugh when i thought about the poem because saw things that i didnt see 1st time. :)
Good job and good rating from me :).

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so true, a heart is not meant to be lonely..lovely sentiment

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This is a powerful but short poem. No one like to have a lonely heart but there always someone out there that loves us keep writing.

Love Dalebear

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wow i feel Bedazzled lol. I really enjoyed the ending i think this style of fliping the switch on what the writers thinking is really good i love to read poems such as these as they provoke such a huge amount of thought in such a small part of time. It actually made me laugh when i thought about the poem because saw things that i didnt see 1st time. :)
Good job and good rating from me :).

Posted 9 Years Ago


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simplicity at its best... Great job!
-Yin

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The reflection is powerful because of the effective usage of emotions and brevity.

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thank you for the reviews:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Simple and straightforward, this poem touches upon that most draining of emotions. I kinda liked the method of starting each line with the last word of the previous line, and I missed it a little in the last two lines. However, it does work to accentuate the ending, so I'm not going to complain. Nicely done.

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how true ! a lonely heart knows no happiness .. it becomes stoically numb .. oblivious to everything around . no pleasure or happiness .. worse than death is what i term this feeling as .. poignant

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Jas Alejandrino Ramos
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Pampanga, Philippines



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I am a Bachelor of Arts in Communication graduate who loves to write poems and novels...I have also a passion for interior designing. more..

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