......The words......

What ever be the reasons hurts me in this world,

It's all the untold words left in my heart... ... 

            Well,

Now i realize...,

The words were  all about you......

Author's Note

It's my first poetry work..

Reviews

[Kayla K]

Such a simple piece with a truly deep meaning.

[brenda]

this is good for a first poem its really good and i love and i can relate to it!!

[Crystal Kelly]

This is pretty good for your very first poetry work. I like the simplicity of it. It's not hard to understand, it's a very easy read and it's something alot of people could relate to. Good job. Keep writing every day!!!

[Lucy]

For a first poem, this was great! I look forward to seeing more of your work!

[Tasha]

This was beautiful! :)

[Sunni Davis]

I see alot of potential in your style. This poem is short but to the point and very expressive and something I think many people can relate to. Keep writing!

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This is very good, like the way you expressed yourself.

[Devon J. Thomas]

Not bad, quite short though. Keep on writin'!

[MoriartyMesa]

I am going to give you knowing but true blue Gonzo style truth, I like this. In many ways it can come off sad, I dont see it that way. More of a 80's retro feeling of lost innocence and youth in the ever advancing of the modern world. And it also reminded me of a song, I hear it with a guitar.