Some Angel

~ a scribble ~

art ~ Ron DiScenza

 

 

 

Some Angel you have become

some graces I still see

in the soft whisper of a moonlit sky

as the wind stirs the stars

and the nightingale sings a serenade

              beautiful and wild

 

I breathe the scent of dewy leaves

and roses blushing as they blow

my senses ravished

 

Is it not the sweetest dream?

to find a piece of heaven…

 

I feel you

yet…in my heart there is a quiet ache

born of a hundred sighs and the burn of tears

and the night,

                that longs to answer

for the one I dream of cannot dream of me…

 

                Some angel you have become

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

You write with such beauty and grace. The flow of your poem submerse me in this tender charms. Angels are the beauty of poetry and are used in every which way. To spread the words of love around this poetry town. Dreams are the imagination of poets everywhere and in your dreams only the sweet things come true. Love your style been reading your for years. WIth much joy in my heart your poetry is the best by far. My heart beats with joy with every word.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous commment Jim. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Johnson Bobby]

I beleive in angles now, miracles and spectacles rainbows
Paper moons and love!

Johnsonbobby

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful and touching........
i loved it!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comments on my poetry. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[WILDERNESS]

That is a beautiful poem capturing the journey of life..................

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

awwww sweet friend.. this one is so beautiful but left my heart saddened... I feel the frustration, the longing, the ache, the sadness in here and it makes me want to reach out and give you a big hug..... the picture is gorgeous and you know how to make your pieces so visually exquisite.. the font, the color, the construction, everything just flows so seamlessly and leaves the reader in awe... you always touch my heart with your writes.... your talent and beautiful spirit always shine on the page, even when you tug on my heart in the wrong direction..lol

sometimes, those angels are not what they seem ma'am... disheartening and disappointing as it may be...

"in my heart there is a quiet ache
born of a hundred sighs and the burn of tears
and the night,
that longs to answer
for the one I dream of cannot dream of me… ".... this moved me... cannot even find the words to express how much.. but I FELT every word and I can, unfortunately, relate on several levels..

((hugs)) ma'am...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words April. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... "The Nightingale sings a song beautiful and wild"...
My favorite line. truly... Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... "And the Nightingale sings a seranade sweet and wild".
Shakespeare said, "parting is such sweet sorrow". Your poem
rests on my breast in longing. truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Zakari Schmidt]

This touched me and held on...very well written!

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Zakari Schmidt]

Of course! I look forward to reading more :)

[willweb]

Sad and lonely but a soft and beautiful piece of writing. Julie, I am never disappointed when I find a new poem from you. I really enjoyed this today.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

What I like about this is it could be about unrequited love or the loss of someone dear. It has that feeling.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[stars are far]

wow, that was very beautiful, an angel youve become, yeah that is some how a very beautiful image to think about. i loved this work..

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment :) Julie

[stars are far]

always my pleasure