Just Me

a quick poem with a good message and well worth the read ... yes yes :) love to all

You ask me who I am 

Just me is my reply 

You say that there’s much more to me

Yet your statement I deny 

I am a trickle in eternity 

A passing cloud above in the sky 

Star-dust falling down to earth 

Just me learning to fly 

When I look upon myself 

In askance of who I be

No lies with what is discovered

No hiding from just me 

In my own perfection 

I notice my many flaws 

Just lessons in this time and space 

Allows transgression through new doors

Others may look upon me 

Scowling in disdain 

But that’s not me in their reflection 

They need the time to look again 

Searching for life’s purpose 

Within hope and aspiration 

Walking through a smokey haze 

Arriving at life’s destination 

Ancient ripples through my body 

Reminder of the wisdom’s we already  know

Travelling to right here, right now 

Just me, I’ve taken time to grow 

Just me is all I am 

Just me is all I be 

Just as I am just like you 

You too are just like me

Reviews

[Justin]

very interesting, well put together!!!

[KWP]

thanks for reading Justin x x

[Justin]

your welcome, it was very good :)

[A. Amos]

Deep and interesting...as always enjoyed the read

[KWP]

thanks boss x

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Woody]

"YOU" is both simple and complex but undeniably interesting, notwithstanding the flaws.
nicely penned as usual.

[KWP]

thank you my friend .... :) hope all is well your side x x

[Woody]

yes, everything's fine, thank you. I trust your part of the world's sunny this time of year x

[KWP]

funny and warm winter just slipped in today :) xx

[Woody]

winter? when's summer?

[KWP]

summer is in six months from now .... arghhh !! x

[Woody]

oh forgot! over there, it's the world on its head!

[Simran Kewlani]

It's a simple poem with a deep meaning. I love such poems.

[KWP]

thanks chick chick x x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes well I must say you are quite a complexity. What is it they say, "we are all onions, you just got to peel the onion. You got my mind entwined in many thoughts.

[KWP]

Well I look forward to seeing what you come up with :-)

Thanks for reading sunshine x x x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Twas my pleasure fair lady.