until you remember

until you remember

A Poem by KWP

the veil lifted from this bond

extradition from ‘us'  a decision mine alone 

blood also belongs to you 

you watch them die

listen to the greed, while

watching them die

let their dying blood 

course your veins 

until you remember what it means to be

human again

© 2024 KWP

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Tremendous. Powerful work.

Posted 2 Months Ago

The hindu's say True Love transcends flesh .... all animals are precious. Memory is our only tombstone (not worded like that)

Posted 4 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

Welcome back!!

3 Months Ago

cheers my friend ..

3 Months Ago

How was the adventure?
woah! and sheesh! scares me darlin' ... would not want to be in the sites of this gun ... easy to be human .. we suck at being above that ;) love ya very big my dear KWP .. wishing you well and then better than that ;)

Posted 4 Months Ago

A very humanitarian poem and what it means to be humans; we all share gifts of humanity, guilts of inhumanity.
Wars break all bonds sadly.

Posted 4 Months Ago

We forget so much when we focus on Selves; think our day to day is how life should be but -is anything but. Comes time to stand and smell fresh air - not the stale; the sad loss of loves and moments spent. Too much of the right and best forgotten, when loss stings

' the veil lifted from this bond
extradition from ‘us' a decision mine alone ' -

can be enforced, nudged as was initially intended by.. who knows. once a decade considered debut!

Should I have applauded your deeply felt feelings -or searched for your opponent's stand, my friend?

Posted 4 Months Ago

When we forget to be human, we lose purpose, we lose the bond with another.
eventually that person's tolerance does not survive.
it is bloody field of evidence left.
the heartless drive the caring away.

Posted 4 Months Ago

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6 Reviews
Added on January 26, 2024
Last Updated on January 26, 2024



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