Fracture

Quiet mornings between sheets

in an effort to be closer to you.

With patient eyes

hidden in grey skies.

Catch the rain

with my bare hands.

Every part of me open

like a tree that keeps giving.

Beautifully fractured.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You so beautifully capture the intimacy of quiet mornings spent yearning for closeness, amidst the patience of hidden emotions and the raw vulnerability of life. Through this imagery, you portray a poignant resilience, likening living to a generous tree despite its beautiful fractures. Wondrous.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. You capture that loving feeling.

[Neville]

No need to try too hard, this is quite simply as near perfect as it gets .. I am so glad I felt compelled to return the earlier favour .. Go well and write on my friend .. all good things, Neville

[Pete]

this is how it feels to love another more than self. we are not whole without that other. deeply from the heart.

[emmajoygreen]

Your words are a masterpiece in written passion, whispered in letters - felt completely. Many, many thanks for sharing, Em's Wonderland.

[Davidgeo]

Your sense of word economy is pretty awesome. Among other things. You write well, I like how you paint your brain to us with words. ( I do remember you from the past ... it's been a while, my profile might be a different name today, but, we have met before )

[Kunst]

I love how accessible the language is here. How it speaks of simplicity, yet with that beautiful vulnerability laced throughout it.

Thank you so much for sharing this. I do so enjoyed the brevity of it.