she remembered

she remembered

A Poem by KWP

and as she sat, 

perched upon the volcanic shoreline

she remembered …. 


wind cavorting across her cheekbones 

daring her to join the dance of life


and she sank 

without realising she was 

cultivating her own moment 


blue waves crashing into white foam 

offering the everlasting 

she remembered …


dancing the eternal 

shedding 

now 


and she felt 

tears stream along her windswept 

cheekbones 


as she wandered in her own

gratitude of existence

© 2022 KWP


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My dear friend. Amazing dance of words.
"blue waves crashing into white foam
offering the everlasting
she remembered …"
The above lines were my favorite, and I liked the places you took me with you. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Good morning,
For me your poem is about life and how important it is to live each day in the present.
To be grateful…
When we are in touch with nature our impressions of our lives changes.
We feel the magnitude of what beauty is around us. The wind, the ocean, etc…
Loved your poem,
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 4 Months Ago


Those moments are so precious. Being close to the natural environment puts things into perspective for me. I find solace there. I really enjoyed this write and how it made me feel. I find freedom in moments like these. Hope you are doing ok hon. Good to see you.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


An interesting write, with some thought-provoking lines!

Posted 4 Months Ago


It is difficult to define my first impression after reading your poem. I had to think hard about the message. I needed time to understand the punch line. I admit I really like your writing style. Your poems are full of beautiful feelings worth paying attention to. I admire your talent. Greetings!

Posted 4 Months Ago


KWP

4 Months Ago

Hey You!

Thank you as always for reading and I very much appreciate your honest thou.. read more

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KWP

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