Look Within

Stop, breathe, and look within and observe

To look on out
To look within 
Within, within 
Let us begin...

To look on out 
All screams and shouts
To look within
Let us begin...

To look on out
Increasing doubt
Look in be free 
Eternity...

Interpretations
Others thoughts 
Lies on the out  
In seeds of doubt 

Cast away the fear
Life's just a game
Let's awaken within
Return where we once came

Reviews

[Stephen]

My fav. verse`s ...

"Interpretations
Others thoughts
Lies without
In seeds of doubt"

This beautiful verse makes me feel i`m floating over the white clouds of honesty with dis-honesty cus, yeah .. sometimes, some thoughts plant what we never except to be planted in this world. What they all plant`s ... "Eternity!" And the love`s itself an eternity ... isn`t it? *Wink*

Very wise and thought---provoking words. Keep it up!!

[MsJewel]

You have shared some wise words in this lovely little gem. I enjoyed the sing-song flow of your poem and the message is clear - look within to find the answers. Uplifting and a delight to read!

:) Julie

[Marie]

Yes. If we can find peace within ourselves, we can spread it to the outside.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

haha, what a fun, witty poem with an intelligent message to the reader… we need only look within ourselves to find the answers we seek in life.