Love of My Life and The Life of Our Love.

Take my hand; show me the way.

Let`s forget tomorrow and live today.

I don`t wanna care; I just want to dance.

Forget the pain; give it a chance.

 

Take my hand; show me the way.

Let go of all fear; listen to what I say.

A beautiful kiss and warm, soft skin.

I will love you now as I loved you then.

 

Take my hand; show me the way.

We`ve lived it all; our hairs are gray.

I`ll love you always; as you may know.

I`ll smile as I pass on; just learn to let me go.

Reviews

[Break The Broken]

Take my hand; show me the way.
Let's forget tomorrow and live today.
I don`t wanna care; I just want to dance.
Forget the pain; give it chance.
that was the best part i love the title for this it fit perfectly with the writing. great job! keep writing

[Ubiquitous]

I love the line "I don`t wanna care; I just want to dance". Very well written, I like the rhymes. I love the carefree air of this poem.

[Seshat Nidaba]

This has a soothing care-free wisdom in it that is very pro-life.

[EMF]

A marvellous poem with a superb pace and flow. Your style has captured the beauty and simplicity of love and you are asking only for your love to take a chance. A wonderful read that frankly leaves a warm glow in a grizzled chest. Superb work

[paparapapa]

I loved the title! And the poem's really sweet!

"Take my hand; show me the way.
We`ve lived it all; our hairs are gray."

Everyone would want this! I love your poem, and I love the rhymes and the flow. Keep on writing! ;)