The Girl Across The Street

I stand beside the street waiting

With my umbrella up while rain is falling

My eyes wandered here and there

Across the street I can't help but stare

Across the street is a girl 

With a blue dress and a shiny pearl

She stands there for quite a while

But she still knows how to smile

But she is too far, I shook my head

Thank God I'm far-sighted

Those eyes, those cheeks, alluring

Her hair, her smile, dazzling

Dazzling as it seems, I was lost in time

She was suddenly gone as the bus drove by

I guess it was just serendipity

As I was left there, still patiently waiting

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You took the reader to good places and thoughts. I like the internal thoughts.
"I guess it was just serendipity
As I was left there, still patiently waiting"
The above lines were a perfect closing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Philip Muls]

You met an angel...and you describe it well. A shared moment. Alluring..dazzling.

Could you read my story Lovesick, same vibe.