IDK

IDK

A Chapter by Ryker Killian
"

I don't know is the answer to ALOT of my questions

"

is this Love?

IDK

if you are left speechless, just by the way she talks,

isn't that Love?

IDK

if your lust grows stronger everytime you smell her perfume,

isn't that Love?

IDK

if you can't help but stare when she smiles,

isn't that Love?

IDK

what i do know,

is that i think its Love,

what i feel for her,

but then again,

what the hell do i know?



© 2011 Ryker Killian


Author's Note

Ryker Killian
Pardon the stupidity, I just have more questions then answers right now

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Gosh... It sure sounds like love to me.:) Including all the questions and the confusion and the "but then again, what the hell do i know?" You could not have wrote this better to be honest. It displayed all the craziness one feels when they have no idea what is going on but all they know for sure is there is something about that person that makes them want to jump their bones. Hell...I understand man.:) I don't know seems like a good enough answer to me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I think it's more lust than love!
I'm not sure if using slang writing/texting style - "IDK", instead of "I don't know" is a frownable offence in poetry, Or writing in general..... But I'd need to check that, as IDK! Lol.
Well done.
Keep smilin' ~ Ds

Posted 12 Years Ago


It sounds more like lust to me.


Posted 13 Years Ago


The beginning of every line in poetry needs to be capitalized, as does "I" and "I think it's love"

Posted 13 Years Ago


Gosh... It sure sounds like love to me.:) Including all the questions and the confusion and the "but then again, what the hell do i know?" You could not have wrote this better to be honest. It displayed all the craziness one feels when they have no idea what is going on but all they know for sure is there is something about that person that makes them want to jump their bones. Hell...I understand man.:) I don't know seems like a good enough answer to me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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