Eat Your F*****g Heart Out (Come One, Come All!)

Eat Your F*****g Heart Out (Come One, Come All!)

A Chapter by Alex Vidmar

Come and get it!
Flesh on the bones!
Fresh flesh!
And warm, blood-red wine!

Come and f*****g eat your heart out!
Dead or alive!  Whatever you are!
Business is business!
I'll sell to anyone!

You, sir; want fresh meat?!
Come on over here; I sell it cheap!
Come and eyeball my fine selections!
My vast array of goodies to munch on!

Now here's a fine, lovely choice;
A girl, not yet two, with a very weak voice!
Not your style, you say?  Something more aged?
Well, let your eyes wander over this way!

Here's a young boy;
Just turned fifteen!
Now stop kicking and shouting!
My family, I need to feed!

Are you still dissatisfied?
Something older??
Well, I have that, right here!
This 40 year old woman should fit your order!

Now, do you want just a piece?
A pound or two?
This woman is very large;
Too, too large for you!

You want the whole thing?
Alright, as you wish!
Let me throw her out for you,
So you can feast on this overweight dish!

Well, no need to get hasty!
There's no reason to growl!
Why listen to this meat here,
She cries like an owl!

Here you go sir!
For you and your friends!
Free of cash,
Credit, check, and charge!

Now you all, savor this meat!
Eat her slowly and taste,
Her p***y and teats!
Don't let any part of her to waste!

Now you ma'am!
What is your fancy?
Let me guess; you're into young women?
Well, I've one left, and she's plenty!

Come here, my love.
It's time for you
To be set free.
Please, don't fight me!

My daughter, my love,
My sweet little girl, my fledgling dove.
I'm going to make a profit with you.
Your mother made a big one, your brother will too!

Here you go, Nia,
The customer awaits!
Now get yourself outside,
Clothes off; that taste she hates!

But before you go,
You're mine for a lil' while.
Come over here,
So I can f**k you for that while!

What are you doing??
Put that cleaver down!
You know, you're mother was
What you are; The W***e of The Town!

Back away!
The customer is angry!
Put your little sister down!
Listen to daddy... NOW!

Wait, what are you doing?!
Lock that door now!
And let me throw you out,
So you can please the crowd!

Get back here,
You ungrateful little B***H!
You broke the lock!
You've let the customers in!

Oh yes, you ma'am...
Well, let me explain!
No!  Stay away!
For me, you haven't paid!

Well, in the end, the customer is always right...
Come one, come all;
Clearance sale tonight!
Come one, come all; fresh flesh for all...


© 2012 Alex Vidmar


Author's Note

Alex Vidmar
This is a story about a father who has gone completely insane during the Infection, and decides to "sell" his family as food to the undead, like a sacrifice to heathen gods.

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I throughly enjoyed reading this chapter. It was entertaining and creepy at the same time. I also like, as I said on the previous comment, the fact that it reads like a poem. It gives each story a certian pace and energy as the reader reads. And in the end the father got what he deserved. Well done

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Wow this is really good though at times I was a little creeped out. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I throughly enjoyed reading this chapter. It was entertaining and creepy at the same time. I also like, as I said on the previous comment, the fact that it reads like a poem. It gives each story a certian pace and energy as the reader reads. And in the end the father got what he deserved. Well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i love this chapter at the beginning of the book i wasn't sure if you were going to continue it with this style of writing and i am very glad you did

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Love the name of this chapter. So far i think this is a kick a*s book, ive never read anything like this. Great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Come and f*****g eat your heart out!

ME: YEAH! *tears own heart out and starts digging in*

I'll sell to anyone!

ME: Oh, you meant eat your heart out as in eat your heart out....oh dear *passes out*


:O d****t this emoticon isn't enough how do you make a face of disgust! not in a bad way but in a good way! oh god i have to show this to my friends stat!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hmmm, I getting to like this dark vampire thing, here. As you give it a damn European touch, lovely work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Whoa. I'm so glad you let me read this.

This is a great one! I can't wait to "Feast" my eyes on the rest.

lmao. c:

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This poem/chapter on its own is pretty decent. It's really intense and macabre and a little shocking, in a way. After reading your description, I understand the material a lot better; you choose the perfect text to convey the insanity of a zombie-infestation-driven breakdown! The stanzas where crazy dad is auctioning his family members are disturbing...in a good way :)

But even though this seems kind incredible and almost farce, the poem is actually pretty tragic when taken in context.

Although it's nice by itself, the sum of the whole is greater than its parts and I tried to look at it as part of the unfolding story cuz well, it is a chapter in a bigger work. I fav'd all of infestation because I think it might be a masterpiece XD nice work, I plan to read all of it sometime soon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Scary Alex :)
Many of your poems i do find them scary!


Posted 12 Years Ago


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That was an amazingly intent piece. Potentially quite vulgar, obviously. But I think that raw approach gives it power in this case. I really like it.
'Captain

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