If I AM ROMEO

Romeo and Juliet

 

IF I AM ROMEO

If I am Romeo, searching that

  Darkling love of her

Formed her path that ignited my light

She was where I blinded and shivered

  She wore the path that lost my sight

Opened-road courage quivered

 Not, in the poem of William Shakespeare

Opened my eyes, spare

Not, from the look of things

While Lucky Dube’s song gave me, glance

From where I saw her, countenance

Stood face bold amid all spear that threw

And broken not the mirror of her strew

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From once I met her, derived me joy

 Genuinely clapped sound opened my coy

Laughed-out-loud amid all what they said

She stood firmed.

 

Caught across the mirror that looked

My heart coughs across a breath of love that choked

 Me, and sneezed me out white pelf

A smell of love and life

When I attempted not to lust after her

Looking and searching for her after her

Desert not the heart void of love

Cupid in the shelves of forgotten gone

In the ecstasy where I dreamt, wet in dreamt

Formed the sweat, where pillow cushioned me dried out wet

Underneath, separated shadow from light of her countenance

From where there was no unison, they refused me, hence

From the abhorrence of heart-penury strife

Defined the wretched look of life

Filled my emptiness

From the riches of things

 

 That bonds us together, with same penchant

Ring she wore on my left hand

I swore to take her by my name; to the altar of my heart,

Even if, they refused

She is my Juliet.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem . I like these lines the most...

My heart coughs across a breath of love that choked

Me, and sneezed me out white pelf

A smell of love and life

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

Thank you very much for appreciating the poem. A friend, indeed you are.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome... :)

[scripted]

this was a great write

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

Thank you so much for your review.

[luviva]

WOW, LOVED IT, WHOEVER YOUR JULIET IS.. SHES LUCKY!!
LOVED THE STRUCTURE, FLOW, WORDING AND THE RYTHM.
REAL GREAT

[Remigius Sunday Eze]

Next time make sure,u don't allude d person u get ur inspiration 4rm.Rather allude d person's work 2 ur work nd leave d burden 2 d reader.

[Remigius Sunday Eze]

Next time make sure,u don't allude d person u get ur inspiration 4rm.Rather allude d person's work 2 ur work nd leave d burden 2 d reader.

[Remigius Sunday Eze]

Your poem makes sense.It synchronized with d pictures therein.The imagery z rather vivid nd revolve round d orbit of love which z d subject matter.keep it up dear

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

I am already synchronized in true love, that is what make my mental picture. Thank you.

[Tate Morgan]

A fine ride on starlit wings of love. All must know these feelings if they are to grow Beautiful

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

Thank you very much for this wonderful review.

[Tate Morgan]

your welcome

[Sunny Skye]

It's like a small story. Very nice and romantic. Good job! I love it.

-SkyeBlanco

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

Sunny sky, thank you so much for your wounderful review.

[Sunny Skye]

Your welcome, I really enjoyed reading this piece