Possibly the Beginning of a Story?

A few days ago I went on the computer and my fingers just typed away to this... tell me how it is because I think I should turn this into a story!

"Gah, keep running stupid legs!" I screamed as they weakened and tried to slow down. As I was running, I felt a freezing touch wrap around my ankle causing me to fall. The fall caused me a shortness of breath so I gasped for air as I felt myself being dragged. I desperately tried to crawl away from this... "thing"... but... it only held on tighter causing me to shriek in pain. I felt hot tears running down my cheeks as dirt, pebbles, and sticks scratched against my arms and sides. More and more of "them" surrounded me.

Why can't they just leave me alone?... I felt more and more freezing hands and claws grabbing at me. I tried to stay away... but they would only come closer and closer at me. They wouldn't give up, not until they had what they wanted. A sacrifice... an offering... this one ritual... to set all free... but... why did it have to be me?

As I was held down, shadows and creatures of all kinds rose surrounding me. Blocking all my ways of exiting or escaping. One by one, they all took out something and mumbled amongst themselves... Repeating words in a language I couldn't make out. High and low, deep and light, man and woman, throughout the night all spoke with a simple might...

To get rid of... the sacrifice... the offering... the one ritual... which would set all free... but... that was me...

Reviews

[Izabe143]

What's next I mean seriously I'm caught in the suspense?!?

[Jan]

I don't know!!!

[Jan]

I have writers block!!!

[Izabe143]

What's that??

[Jan]

When you can't think of what to write

[Izabe143]

Oh ok that makes sense check out my knew chapters.

[Jan]

Okay! I will! I am right now!

[Izabe143]

Hey when your done i might be off I need to get some sleep I have a bout 15 more minutes thats it.

[Megan B.]

Dude run with it. sounds great!

[Jan]

Fffffwhy thank you!