Tick Tock

The tick

Tock

Of your watch

Kept perfect imperfect time

Last I knew it was but the screw

That wiggled when you'd wind

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Twenty three words ! Your stories are
getting so long.
I can hardly wait to see what`s next.
I love these little stories because I love the
economy of words-- you say so much with the
use of so little.
Great work. Thanks.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Sally Edwards]

LOL, cute poem, short and sweet, love it, can't wait for the next

[THE BLACK SEAL]

lol

[The Elder Pine]

I agree, your precision use of words is akin to the scalpel. You say so much in such a potent package. I look forward to reading more work from you soon.

-High Road

[E. M. Murren]

LOL That was a fun read. I like this a lot. Very playful.

[Lea Jane]

That was a cute poem, short and to the point! You have amazing rhythm and rhyme here, nice work.

[Jack E.]

Short and sweet. You did a great job with meter and rhyme. And although it was short and concise, the imagery was still intact. Superb job.