Repurposed-Part Two

Repurposed-Part Two

A Poem by Laurierose
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Part two.

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Going once

Going twice

Love's for sale

Name your price

Keep hands up

Wave promise to the sky

Persistence is key

Only truth will suffice

It's up for grabs

Anyone can bid

There on display, it waits

For that someone whose worth it

© 2019 Laurierose


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Laurierose
Stay tuned ( 2 of 3).

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Nicely creative way to say: "I'm in the race!" I love the way your message has tones of longing, tones of bravely overcoming one's reticence to go forth & find love, which is very true-to-life for how it can feel. One feels vulnerable, like being on an auction block. Love such imagery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

1 Year Ago

Wow, you've described my thought process and more! Thanks, Margie.



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Hello again Laurie:) Great Rhyme and Rhythm and a delightful upbeat energy to this one. But in my ear it somewhat belies the feeling of the lines of which I enjoy very much... the contrasting of tone to tome. and the ending punchline frames the melodic in a stark manor, underlining the message. I call this clever and very sincere

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

4 Months Ago

Yes, I opted for the urgency factor in this piece. It felt more true to the message. I have enjoyed .. read more
The quick line breaks really build up momentum for the poem! Nicely done :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review!!
Nicely creative way to say: "I'm in the race!" I love the way your message has tones of longing, tones of bravely overcoming one's reticence to go forth & find love, which is very true-to-life for how it can feel. One feels vulnerable, like being on an auction block. Love such imagery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laurierose

1 Year Ago

Wow, you've described my thought process and more! Thanks, Margie.

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Added on September 6, 2018
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Laurierose
Laurierose

Durham, NC



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Poet at heart. Romantic by nature. Nature the style. Styled by experiences. Experience this world that is my mind... If interested, check out my book in stores: https://www.amazon.com/Wonderful-.. more..

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