Ready...Aim...Fire!

Don't won't to spoil it.

 

Ready...Aim...Fire!

 

Standing,

    cocked and ready

With practiced precision,

    he takes careful aim

At the target trained in his sight,

    and fires!

 

 

"Good boy! You went pee-pee in the potty."

 

Legion

11Sep08

Author's Note

Ha! Something quirky for my grandson going through potty training. lol

Reviews

[angelina neves]

:) very sweet!

[Seriana]

Hahaha! Legion, this is so cute! Love it. Having a son myself, I can relate. Nice job!

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lol
this was unexpected and welcomed from seriousness of life
thanks for sharing

[Master Morality]

Oh, dear. I've fallen for it again.
Expecting some sort of drama and then being completely bemused for a few seconds when I hit the punchline.

Haha, lets hope he can keep the aim steady.

[Gaiamethod]

Perhaps Germaine Greer was right!! And Freud ??? LOL
You never know, he might grow up to be a great archer!

[Wolfwind Words]

Hoo Yah! A wonderful piece of humorous action!

Let's just hope that the aim is good everytime!

An enjoyable read!

Aaron Maycroft

[Larissa G.]

Heh, oh dear. I thought this would be something else and instead...
Ever consider publishing a child's poetry book? Or something for parents to read as amusement?

[O!]

hehe...too cute...i knew it wouldnt have been about violence. :-P

x,
O!

[Jacky Bones]

omg dude that was really funny

[Cole Spire]

LOL!!!!

I loved this, simple, sweet, and to the point.

I get to go through this soon with my own son. I loved this so much it made me hurt from laughing.