Drunk Phone Call

When you called I thought "Oh what did he do"?

Because you didn't even sound like you.

I guess you had one to many drinks tonight.

And now you've called me to just  fight.

That girl shouldn't have ran her mouth.

It makes me want to shout!

You shouldn't have listend to waht she said.

You should have just gone home and went to bed.

But instead you went and got drunk.

And darling that really STUNK.

Because you sre did run your mouth to me.

Things I didn't want to beilive.

So I hope you had fun.

Because if you do it again then we are SO done!

Reviews

[eatmills]

I really hoped you forwarded a copy to the guilty party. Emotions and situations painted pictures in my head. 'Cause truth is, I was once the drunk on the other line.

[Andrea Vargas]

I think you have shared an intense amount of emotion. I love how you end your piece with the strong ending of WE ARE DONE. I feel the flow could you use more stability. All in all though I really loved the message~

[Alex Vidmar]

This is great. love this Leslie. Keep it up!

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks (:

[Alex Vidmar]

Welcome :)

[WinterIce<3]

I can feel the emotions in this poem keep up the great writing ;)

[Secret Lullaby]

thank you

[WinterIce<3]

your welcome :)

[Rhea752]

nicely done keep writing. :)

[Owlgirl]

Wow, emotional, nice job :)

[Eleanor]

Great job

[Justin Flume]

good job Sec.

[afra]

very powerful ....good job