A Haunted Mind

A Haunted Mind

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

He has been walking for so long.

His sanity is now gone.

For days he has had conversations in his head.

With a girl he knows is dead.

To him it's like she is really there.

This torture is not fare.

Because in truth the girl he could not save,

Is still six feet in her grave.

And no matter how far he keeps walking.

She still keeps talking.

He sometimes  begs her to go away.

But it seems she is going to stay.

So the girl he knows is dead,

Will forever be living in his head.




© 2012 Secret Lullaby

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A superb story halfway from being romantic and dark, pretty cool, loved it =D

Posted 11 Years Ago

Gotta agree with afra and Musicfunk

Posted 11 Years Ago

shortly written yet full of emotions
..nice love poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

awwwwwww really sweet ...i can relate a lot with this poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

so sweet and true...it a little way a gone person may always be alive, alive in someone else's lives...

Posted 11 Years Ago

Absolutely lovely. the poem tells a story and i love that. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on July 1, 2012
Last Updated on July 2, 2012


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