The Legend of Mistletoe

The Legend of Mistletoe

A Poem by Askew
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The reason we kiss under mistletoe comes from Norse mythology and I really liked the story, so I wrote a poem on it for Creative Writing class

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Beautiful Frigga, goddess of Love and Marriage,
Wife of the powerful Odin,
And mother of the beloved Baldur.
Frigga's gifts and strengths were plentiful
And with them she wove the clouds,
Creating rain and thunderstorms
She divined the futures of men and gods alike.
When beloved Baldur was born
Frigga was not alone in her joy.
The celebration was short-lived however,
When the goddess saw that her favourite son,
Her beautiful Baldur,
Would die a young man.
In a state of panic
Frigga raced about
Seeking out everyone and everything
To extract from them a vow
That none would play a part in Baldur's death.
Sitting at the foot of the trees,,
Kneeling in rivers,
Looking to the sky,
To fire and metal,
Calling upon each disease,
Upon every beast and bird,
Upon all poisons,
And everything that crept and crawled,
"None will do harm to Baldur," she cried.
"We will spare him," they answered.
The gods were amazed,
In awe!
The sought amusement by hurling darts,
Flinging stones, and attacking with swords,
Yet Baldur walked away, unscathed.
Never a mark upon beloved Baldur's beautiful skin.
Watching from the shadows,
Loki,
God of Mischief,
Quaked and sneered with jealousy.
He traveled the galaxies
In search of a tiny and young plant
That Frigga had forgotten to ask.
Mistletoe grew solely in solitude,
Resulting in a harrowing journey for the loathly Loki.
After fashioning a singular arrow
From the insignificant plant,
The troublemaker god tricked
Poor, blind Hodur,
God of Winter,
Who was desperate to join the other gods
In the game of trying to harm Baldur.
With the help of Loki
Guiding his unseeing hand
The arrow flew
And pierced Baldur's heart,
And his life left with a flash.
Distraught and heartbroken
Beautiful Frigga, goddess of Love and Marriage,
Wife of the powerful Odin,
And once mother of the beloved Baldur,
Then lifted the arrow
That killed her favourite son
And promised that mistletoe
Would forevermore
Be seen as a symbol of love and peace,
And so she declared,
"All who stand beneath it,
Will be blessed with a kiss."

© 2018 Askew


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Wonderful poetical tribute to ‘Baldur’; you certainly encapsulated this great piece of Norse mythology. Links well with the season; mistletoe/Christmas so symbolic and near at hand. An enjoyable read, but note: the eight stanza from the end – should it read ... ‘then’ lifted the arrow? Nice one ...:-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Askew

5 Years Ago

Thank you for enjoying it, and thank you for catching that mistake!



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I'm new to mythology. Sort of a tragic, yet beautiful piece of the story of mistletoe. :) I really enjoyed this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Askew

5 Years Ago

This is probably one of my all time favourite myths, it's got a bit of everything. Humour, love, gri.. read more
Ah, I remember this myth. You did a lovely job turning it into a poem. :)
I forgot back then, but remembering now, it's rather a sad tale when we think of mistletoe and Christmas bringing love and people together rather than destroy it. But that's how a lot of mythology goes; it's rather contrary; however, in being so, it's often hopeful too.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful poetical tribute to ‘Baldur’; you certainly encapsulated this great piece of Norse mythology. Links well with the season; mistletoe/Christmas so symbolic and near at hand. An enjoyable read, but note: the eight stanza from the end – should it read ... ‘then’ lifted the arrow? Nice one ...:-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Askew

5 Years Ago

Thank you for enjoying it, and thank you for catching that mistake!

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