A Poem by Pebbles

some souls have met before im sure of it or maybe they are yet to meet im not sure its just a feeling .....lily this is for you

She floats, swims and flies through my mind at times
Whispering beautiful quotes
Only she hears alone
For she speaks in toungues
I don't ever quite understand
But I so wish I did

Maiden of the forest
Alone in her own skin

She is in wanting for life to give her what she desires
But blocking her way
Is rocks that have fallen across
The caverns within her imagination
OR trees that cover the paths in which she walks

Little does she know
But they were placed there by her own sweet hand
I saw

Sweet child sit a while beside the pool of crystal memories
BathE in your naked truth

Let go of the events that cripple your mind
Leaving you a slave to the power of the past

Come I can lend a hand if you need
I know
Ive been here many a time

You must savour
The moment
Just before
Letting go


How do you say good bye
When your leaving a part of yourself behind

In truth
MAybe thats why there is always a need to return
Child of wisdom
Listen to your own mummblings

Within them you will find
What you need to be free ...

© 2011 Pebbles

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This is wonderful, Pebbles. :) A story woven into a poem that sounds so much like it could be a song, and I liked how each different font size, bold, and italicized phrases made the phrases themselves that much more impacting and beautiful. Well done.


Posted 8 Years Ago

I love your dance of words and thoughts... This exquisite dedication is filled with wisdom and life... and a longing for that place of freedom we all desire.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Yes indeed, Lily is very lucky to have such a friend. What as wonderful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Lily is lucky to have a friend like you. Your holding the light for her when it's hard for her to see.

Posted 8 Years Ago

You can never really close the door to times of old
for that is where you come from and that's were you
have gain your wisdom, this stanzas here touch my soul and took me back
to were i came from
Maiden of the forest
Alone in her own skin
This is a very beautiful poem
Brilliant writing

Posted 8 Years Ago

I liked it a lot, written with the right intentions

Posted 8 Years Ago

are progress is stoped because we want it to be,? or does it just happen like the sunrise. we should leave a part of ourself in the past so that in case we get lost we might find where we came from.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is a beautiful piece and a touching write for your friend showing your friendship through wonderful imagery and emotional phrases. Keep em' coming

Posted 8 Years Ago

A charming invitation to a charming poet - I guess we have all been there.. I guess we all need a hand... and Lily has such a warm one

Posted 8 Years Ago

This was beautiful and well written like the structure as well
really liked the lines.... Maiden of the forest Alone in her own skin

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on September 4, 2011
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Bristol, South West, United Kingdom

If I didnt write I would probably go out of my mind, I am inspired by everything and everyone around me, you want to know more about me just read my poetry ... all is good in my world .... The film .. more..


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