jOURNEY

some souls have met before im sure of it or maybe they are yet to meet im not sure its just a feeling .....lily this is for you

She floats, swims and flies through my mind at times
Whispering beautiful quotes
Only she hears alone
For she speaks in toungues
I don't ever quite understand
But I so wish I did

Maiden of the forest
Alone in her own skin

She is in wanting for life to give her what she desires
But blocking her way
Is rocks that have fallen across
The caverns within her imagination
OR trees that cover the paths in which she walks

Little does she know
But they were placed there by her own sweet hand
I saw

Sweet child sit a while beside the pool of crystal memories
BathE in your naked truth

Let go of the events that cripple your mind
Leaving you a slave to the power of the past

Come I can lend a hand if you need
I know
Ive been here many a time

You must savour
The moment
Just before
Letting go

BECAUSE IT HURTS

How do you say good bye
When your leaving a part of yourself behind
In truth
MAybe thats why there is always a need to return
Child of wisdom
Listen to your own mummblings

Within them you will find
What you need to be free ...

Reviews

[Morning Star]

You can never really close the door to times of old
for that is where you come from and that's were you
have gain your wisdom, this stanzas here touch my soul and took me back
to were i came from
Maiden of the forest
Alone in her own skin
This is a very beautiful poem
Brilliant writing

[Violeta]

This is wonderful, Pebbles. :) A story woven into a poem that sounds so much like it could be a song, and I liked how each different font size, bold, and italicized phrases made the phrases themselves that much more impacting and beautiful. Well done.

Violeta

[An owl on the moon]

I love your dance of words and thoughts... This exquisite dedication is filled with wisdom and life... and a longing for that place of freedom we all desire.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Yes indeed, Lily is very lucky to have such a friend. What as wonderful poem.

[Diane]

Lily is lucky to have a friend like you. Your holding the light for her when it's hard for her to see.

[Aidz]

I liked it a lot, written with the right intentions

[nowhere]

are progress is stoped because we want it to be,? or does it just happen like the sunrise. we should leave a part of ourself in the past so that in case we get lost we might find where we came from.

[Inyourshadow]

This is a beautiful piece and a touching write for your friend showing your friendship through wonderful imagery and emotional phrases. Keep em' coming

[Jibey]

A charming invitation to a charming poet - I guess we have all been there.. I guess we all need a hand... and Lily has such a warm one

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

This was beautiful and well written like the structure as well
really liked the lines.... Maiden of the forest Alone in her own skin