Prolouge

Its a prolouge. :)

     

    Macey Trenk always loved to swim. She was the best and fastest on the High School swim team, and she could even hold her breath for over two minuetes straight! But, what happened to her the summer before her sixteenth birthday, was just plain rediculouse.

Reviews

[Libby]

This made me smile. Leave the mistakes in, they add to it's charm!

[Lime-Eater]

Sorry I can't spell that good! :)

[compositionc]

minuetes- minutes
rediculouse- ridiculous

It's an interesting beginning, I guess.

[MunkeeFareek]

Em, you really need a dictionary. It's awesome, though!

[Lemon-Eater]

rediculouse! its my new word! :)

[Lime-Eater]

It's very short... :)