Poetry in Motion

Poetry in Motion

A Poem by Linear
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Its just my take

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Its strange how poems change before our eyes
somehow metaphor into another better being
than first we thought

But how or why, i have often wondered
never yet concluding, left open to all debate.

The written words seem to blossom and grow
have a life of their own
devoid of any action on the writers part
and somehow somethi
ng quite different
Is born of our imagination

© 2011 Linear


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I really like it. Your take on poetry is neat!
I can relate to the first stanza. Most people who aren't crazy for poetry think I'm nuts when I try and get them to understand the metaphors! Well an inside joke for us I guess----

The written words seem to blossom and grow
have a life of their own - Those are my favourite lines in your poem. They are very nicely said (good imagery) and mean so much. A line just seems to get better and better each time we read!
Really well done, added to my favourites!


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You have taged us all so well! Wonderfully written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like it. Your take on poetry is neat!
I can relate to the first stanza. Most people who aren't crazy for poetry think I'm nuts when I try and get them to understand the metaphors! Well an inside joke for us I guess----

The written words seem to blossom and grow
have a life of their own - Those are my favourite lines in your poem. They are very nicely said (good imagery) and mean so much. A line just seems to get better and better each time we read!
Really well done, added to my favourites!


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

But that is the mind of poet and writer what they think sometimes come out differently on paper. that is why we write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


oh you expressed this so well...so true...that is exactly how it goes...great job....

Posted 8 Years Ago


There are no conclusions, indeed... this is poetry! Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


It sure is, we can start with an idea and the idea goes wayward and changes whenever it wishes LMAO
Excellent poem
xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is true...very very deep poem, really got my mind thinking. What we create takes on a life of its own and it becomes devoid of us and allowed to run free. Fantastic write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful, I like this.
Love the last stanza, the best.
Very nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


oh, thats amazing, magic is always under your pen, and I agree with you, words seems to shine and glow when we write it, I so keep a journal as well, I guesss thats help ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

=) we're but conduits for our muses and those beings and ideas they create through us

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 17, 2010
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Linear

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