Burn Forever

Burn Forever

A Poem by Karina Longo
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It's been a while, hello. :)

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All I want is to burn forever

Explode and fly, high in the sky

Let me be more than Icarus, unmelting

On the top of eternity

 

All I want is to build a new atmosphere

Golden frame, magnificent

Screaming, happy painting

 

All I want is to climb and rise

No birds above me, no God,

No nothing.

 

Let’s throw a party full of kissing fireworks

Let the champagne pop, hear the candle’s

Most secret whisper to the wind,

Embrace the warmth, my dear

And the night shall be always full of light

 

All I want is to make it never be the same

So even if it might sound insane

Let me burn, burn - forever and again

© 2012 Karina Longo


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I like the energy and the hope in this poem. Good to feel the desire of no fear and not afraid of the road ahead. I like the complete poem. Strong ending to the outstanding poem. Always good to read your poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is so good! I love it you did a great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

definitely musical..........brilliant Karina!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Lyrical and punchy. The energy never stopped. This poem gave me a sense of freedom that made me feel like I could just float away. I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the energy and the hope in this poem. Good to feel the desire of no fear and not afraid of the road ahead. I like the complete poem. Strong ending to the outstanding poem. Always good to read your poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What I enjoyed here is the insistance and tempo created by the repeating lines All I want, that give the poem a centre and a structure, good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very inspirational read! I just love the idea of wanting to burn, not literally but metaphorically, almost like the sun. To be heard and to be seen, not just live on the surface anymore.

Beautiful work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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