Dear Agony

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

I am with you all the time

you're there when I'm not fine

your life the same as mine. 

Over and over, repetitious 

pain like rain, so malicious 

part of me so propitious.

Though you leave me emancipated

it feels though I'm decapitated 

my life utterly annihilated.

So leave me dead

let me drip the crimson red 

as you linger in my head. 

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

Reviews

[jacjac44]

!!!!!!AMAZING!!!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words in your poem. The strength and power in every line. This poem is very good. I like how you ended the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Emily?]

I absolutely love'd it! Very well done. The words you chose are so meaning full! Its really great! Wonderful Job!=]

[lindsay]

I like how you rhymed this a lot, quite different. I like the repetition at the end. Good write.

[Chelsea.]

Wonderful poem. I loved the vocabulary you used in this piece.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much... you have an amazing talent

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Wow...Once again, amazing. This would make a really, really good song. This poem is going on my favs :)

[A]

Your emotion in this piece is so clear. This poem is very sad but at the same time very good. I love how you ended your poem with the same three lines you started your poem with. It pulled me back to what your poem was really saying. I'm sure this poem is very relateable as well. I bet a lot of people have felt like this at least once in their life time. I know I have. This poem was truly great! :)

[Theresa]

You can definitely feel the agony pouring out of every line and every word. I loved the verse:
"So leave me dead
let me drip the crimson red
as you linger in my head."
Another great piece.

[LivingDeath]

i didnt rip off BB everyone i just used the title so i could get some inspiration.

LivingDeath