Memories

Moonlight shines on the midnight road 

 Emphasizing the morning dew,

  Music plays as soft as love

   Over the nights with you.

    Rising to the waking sun

     I stand here by your side,

      Enjoying all the time we have

       Strolling through the oceans tide.

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, I think this is one of my favourites of yours!
It flows so fluidly, so naturally!
The images here were amazing, the road with the dew, and the sun and the ocean- what vivid colours were painted. Your word choice was brilliant! I was seriously stunned with "Music plays as soft as love" That was powerful.
Great job!

[Bette]

i could see this in my mind such a short poem to put such a beautiful picture in my head! well done

[Felicity Winter]

This is awesome! Love it!

This is great, lucky girl to be exposed to such raw emotion.

[YourXArtist]

i love it :D it's really great ^_^

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

beautiful, short but beautiful

[Undying Glory]

really sweet work. awesome

[Fallen Angel]

I love this one! it reminds me of goodtimes with my gf. nicely done!

Keep on writing!

[Jane Doe]

I LUUUVVV ITTTTT!!!!!!! keep writing i l0ve readin rz

[Lilly]

soft and beautiful.
lovely images created here.

[Abhinav]

very beautifullly written......lovely rromantic write!