Pistanthrophobia

Very short, semi abstract poem.

Tranquil worlds ablaze

solar flares of ocean tide,

the pulse beneath obscurity

is the dark where angels die. 

Author's Note

This can mean anything. Re read it. What does it mean to you? I know exactly what this poem means to me, but what about to you. Give me some feed back.

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

Interesting...Very interesting. I read this many times and kept pondering, each time a new dimension came up. I am still thinking as I decide to write this review. When what is known and constant doesn't make sense anymore, cannot be trusted anymore, the unknown even perhaps obscure gives solace.

I will be thinking about these words for many days to come. Very deep write. Thanks for sharing.

[Black]

well that there are many lies
and though the worlds keeps going on,
the once who are good, are in pain
and no one notices it,
maybe im way off, but thats what it means to me

[stars are far]

It means to me that the world will keep moving on even when the dark come it will not stop ...

[Megan]

To me, it means that the world will keep spinning, and beauty will still be in the darkest of places no matter what happens. Because that's what it takes to make life exactly that..life. When I say "life" picture it as it's own entity and that should make what I'm saying clearer..i hope.
great write, and I loved how it makes you think :)

[Veritatis Cupitor]

At first I took the words fairly literal. Imagining these lines vivid and clear and wondering about the thin line dividing heaven from hell.
Re reading and taking the title into concern, it felt more about a relationship between 2 people and the intensity a fear of trusting can create. Its like an unbearable weight that cant be lifted... anxiety that is irrational. Stifling something that could have been fine.

Really though, my thoughts keep going back to my first interpretation. A thin line that separates worlds. But then it also feels apocalyptic. Like all is lost for man and our fate...

[Sleeping Maiden]

Such an interesting title you have. Hmm this seems to make me think. But it made me feel of destruction..everything breaking apart due to a devastating pain that couldn't be freed from one's soul. All pain wrapped around the soul and finally dying due to the darkness.. everything's dying.. there's no sunshine.. no hope.. Just pain..loneliness... hate.. coldness.. i liked it. =) Nice piece.

[Tasha]

I liked the title. To me it meant a place where there is a lot of issues and everything dies because of the destruction. Great write by the way. :)
♥ Ta'Shandra